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Chapter 9



It had been two days since Jack last saw Pitch, and his body ached to see him again. He didn't care if they did nothing, he just longed to be in the man's presence. The boy wanted to run into Pitch's arms and never leave, but how could he? That would be selfish, wouldn't it? He was a guardian, he had responsibilities, didn't he? The Nightmare King tried to wipe his friends from existence, how could he just simply forget that?

The act was unforgivable,but it didn't stop the guardian's heart from beating a mile a minute when he saw the boogeyman. Suddenly the frost elf was in the air and flying towards Pitch's lair; his heart wouldn't allow him to stay away any longer. The snow spirit landed outside the hole, and was about to dive in, but he couldn't move. His heart was begging him to go inside, while his brain was yelling at him to leave as fast as possible.

The brain won.

Jack began to walk away, when all of a sudden he was lifted off the ground. A half a second later Jack realized he had been thrown over Pitch's shoulder. "PUT ME DOWN!" The guardian blushed, while repeatedly hitting Pitch's back.

"My my, such horrible behavior." The Nightmare King pointed out, an annoyed expression obvious on his face. "If you keep struggling there will be consequences."

Jack was to embarrassed and worried the guardians would somehow see them to pay attention to Pitch's warning. "PUT ME DOWN! PUT ME DOWN NOW!"

The boogeyman sighed. "I warned you." Pitch made a chair out of black sand, sat down, and draped Jack across his knees. Before the frost elf could reflect on what just happened, he felt something strike his backside, causing him to cringe. The boy looked up to see Pitch with his hand raised.

"What the hell are you doing?!" Jack asked, confusion and irritation in his voice.

"I warned you to behave yourself, but you didn't listen." Pitch brought his hand down on Jack again, forcing the snow spirit to bite his lip to keep a whimper from coming out.

Pitch continued to beat the guardian, who looked so much more like a child then ever before. "Gahh! Stop it!" Jack went to reach for his staff, and it looked as if he would almost get it, when Pitch scooted it just a few inches away.

"Stop trying to get out of punishment, Jack. You deserve this."

Jack could feel his eyes stinging, but he refused to cry, especially at the hands of his enemy. The Nightmare King spanked the boy again, and Jack realized he wouldn't be able to hold back his tears for much longer. "S-STOP IT! STOP IT NOW!"

"But you have yet to say you're sorry, which means you haven't learned your lessons yet." As Pitch continued to punish the frost elf, Jack struggled to get away, but unfortunately for him he wasn't successful.The boogeyman spanked the boy once more, and a small cry slipped out of Jack's mouth as he felt a few tears roll down his cheeks.

Seeing Jack crying slightly, Pitch picked the guardian up, who quickly wrapped his arms around the man's neck and his legs around the man's middle. Using his free hand the Nightmare King picked up the staff and began walking towards his lair.

"Y-you're a jerk." Jack said with a muffled voice, since he was hiding his head in Pitch's shoulder.

"And you're a child that needed punishment."

"I'm three hundred and eighteen!" Jack shouted as Pitch entered his lair.

"True, but you still act childish."

Jack wiped his eyes, his tears starting to cease. "Yeah like your a role model."

"I could be, if I really tried, but it isn't worth it." Resting Jack's staff against the headboard, he placed the snow spirit on the bed, and leaned in to kiss him.

Jack looked annoyed, and covered Pitch's mouth with his hand. "No."

Pitch removed Jack's hand from his lips. "Excuse me?"

"I'm mad at you. I'm not in the mood for you to kiss me."

"Tell me your kidding." The Nightmare King stated.

"Nope." Jack said crossing his arms, a devious smile on his face. "But you could make it up to me."

The boogeyman sat up. "I'm not going to like this, am I?" Jack's smile only got wider. "What is it?"

"You can make things besides horses out of nightmaresand right?"

"Yes..."

"Make me a dinosaur."

"Really, a dinosaur? Frost, you're more of a child then I thought."

"Fine," Jack said getting up. "I'll just leave then." Pitch quickly wrapped his arms around Jack, and pulled him close.

The Nightmare King let out a sigh. "I can't believe I'm doing this. What kind of dinosaur?"

The guardian smiled. "A Triceratops." A large pile of black sand formed in front of them, and it slowly took the shape of a Triceratops. "Awesome!" Jack stated, standing up and walking towards the beast. "This thing is so cool." Suddenly the dinosaur tried to bite the boy. "Geez, how'd I piss it off?"

"You didn't, but it isn't made of dreamsand Jack. Creatures made of nightmaresand aren't kind and gentle." Pitch said, rolling his eyes.

"Well that's kinda messed up." Without warning the Triceratops disappeared, and Jack was dragged back to the bed. Before the boy could say anything, Pitch leaned in and took over his mouth. The frost elf wrapped his arms around Pitch, bringing the man as close as possible. While the two were enjoying each others company, Jack realized his lips felt strange. They were becoming increasingly warm, and he didn't know what to think of it.

Jack pushed Pitch away, looking slightly nervous. Pitch looked at the snow spirit with a confused expression. "What's wrong?"

"My lips feel really warm..." Jack said touching his lips, acting like they were a foreign object. "Is that okay?"

Pitch laughed, surprised again at Jack's innocence. "It's alright, you'll be fine." At this, Jack nodded timidly, and the couple returned to their pleasure. About ten minutes later they stopped, since Jack still wasn't used to the sensations. Jack laid in Pitch's arms, and rested his head on Pitch's chest.

"Pitch?"

"Yes?" The Nightmare King answered, looking down at the boy.

"Um.."

"What?" Pitch said, growing curious.

"I-I..um..I like you."

Pitch stared down in shock; he didn't know what to say. They were simple words, they were even childish, but they meant so much to him. The boogeyman pushed Jack's bangs out of his eyes with a smile. "I like you too." Jack grinned, and he scooted closer to Pitch. The two were doing nothing, and it was wonderful, just like Jack thought it would be.

To be continued.

Yay finally did it! Sorry, I put it off for sooo long. So what did you guys think? I particularly like the ending. Tell me in the comments if you have a favorite part! I'd love to hear about it! :D Bye for now!
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:iconmavissilvermoon:
MavisSilvermoon Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
shouldve asked for a dragon! 0_0 I would!
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MiniFearling Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Where were you when I was writing this? That's much better!
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MavisSilvermoon Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
DRAGONS FTW!! Toothless 
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NyxEphriham Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Awww almost made me cry with joy it was so cute! You, my good friend, have earned yourself a fan!
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MiniFearling Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks!
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NyxEphriham Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome!
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ellablue22 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013
I died reading this! It is so good!!!!! Kill me now!! FANGIRLING!!!
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MiniFearling Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much! No, you can't die! You must live! lol.
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AquaCrimsonDragon Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013
Dinosaurs, I like 'em but must say I like dragons better. And that was A-DOR-A-BLE!
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MiniFearling Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aw, thank you!
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AquaCrimsonDragon Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013
Yep and my mom's just overprotective and doesn't want my mind to be corrupt. The best part is, its been too late for years.
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Snowy818 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Its too late for years lol
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TrueOkamiAmaterasu Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Student Writer
PFFFFT yeah, mine too, my mind it was too late when I was 12, lol
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MiniFearling Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
xD Nice.
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forestgirl99 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
DINOSAURS giggles great idea
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ChibiCreamPuff Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013   Traditional Artist
It was cute and funny seeing Jack get excited to see a dinosaur! xD
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MiniFearling Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
xD I was hoping people would like it, glad you found it funny!
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DeviantHarriet Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013
naww the dinosaur bit was so sweet :)
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MiniFearling Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:D I was trying to go for sweet and humorous, so yay!
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Yamoko Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Awww I love the endigng <3.
and the part with the dinosaur ^^. (hehehe pitch is getting soft .)
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MiniFearling Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Jack seems to have that effect on people.
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Yamoko Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
which is good :D
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GeettaKiho89 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
awwwww this so so adorable as always~ and I loved the spanking part from the bottom of my heart!
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MiniFearling Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you, I'm glad you liked the chapter! Haha, really? I thought Pitch would get annoyed, and I saw him do that to Jack in other fanart so I decided to try it. Happy to know you found it amusing. :D
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GeettaKiho89 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Spanking is ALWAYS a hot thing! remember that!! <3
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MiniFearling Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
xD okay then..but Jack didn't think so.
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GeettaKiho89 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
WHOO CAREES! btw do you rp?
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MiniFearling Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah. It's fun. :D
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GeettaKiho89 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
OMG!!! We'll have to start a roleplay! Fuck yes omg I love rping and it's my liiiiife wich one you are usuaaly? Uke or seme?
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MiniFearling Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
O_O NOT THAT KINDA RP!!! I'M IN 9TH GRADE DUDE!!!
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haikune007 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
oh you do know how to make a fangirl happy, don't you? although the spanking part did seem weird to me, but that can be just because i personally don't like them, neither irl or in stories, but this chapter is love~
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MiniFearling Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
haha I'm glad I made you happy! :D And sorry you didn't like the other part, but I just wanted to do it. Can't say why though, lol. I hope you don't find me weird.
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haikune007 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
nah, that's okay,i think you're awesome for taking the task of feeding the hoards of fangirls with your story XD that's really very brave of you
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MiniFearling Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Brave and stupid. Every time I post a chapter I have to wear armor and have a sword handy to keep the fangirls off my back. XD
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haikune007 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol nobody said there weren't drawbacks XD
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